Beer Review
Please review my story.?
This is a year-old son Thirteen that while in hiding a beer from the fridge dads, is attacked by a murderer. As they tried to escape he is helped by a mysterious man (who will not give this guy (named Colin) of his name). While escaping make camp a forest at night. When Colin wakes up, is a burden gone.After of events I will not go into now, Colin meets his long lost wife Penelope, and learns that man is called Ulysses. And the company with a partner met the seas in search of knowledge in the company of murderers, they intend to get rid of Colin, but stowawayss on the boat. End of book 1 so sorry! MORE THAN HALF somehow got cut! DO NOT KNOW!
Hi there, From what I see here its history is vague and confusing. Why attack the guy? Where does the man who helped pass? Is Colin's wife or the man's wife. Basically, this summary, I can not say that I highly rate your story. However, if you gave a better overview, it would help. Cheers-Lapin
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